Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Peer Review

The peer review session certainly helped, at least marginally in giving me other viewpoints to base my paper on. Since the paper deals with primarily personal issues and memories, review is limited to writing technique and fluidity of thought. Content cannot very well be scrutinized. In that respect though, the session allowed me time to work out technique improvement.

2 comments:

schasey said...

I agree with your assesment on the personal level with the reflection. You are right, we can't scrutinize the message and purpose of the reflection we can only help with grammatical issues.

Kimmie S said...

I thought you had some great perspectives on how technology takes away from interpersonal human communication. I really liked how you took a different view than I did on my paper. And I agree with you. This was a nice project to see different viewpoints.